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Title: Return Of Ankhesenamun by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Gromet on June 01, 2016, 09:19:04 AM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.mummified.net/storieslr/returnofankhesenamun.html
Solo-F; F/f; mummies; display; hist; unwrap; transform; bodyswap; trapped; encased; discovery; toys; insert; mast; climax; cons/nc; X

http://www.mummified.net/storieslr/returnofankhesenamun2.html
Solo-F; F+/f+; mummies; unwrap; transform; bodyswap; trapped; encased; display; mc; enslave; lesb; oral; sex; climax; cons/nc; X

http://www.mummified.net/storieslr/returnofankhesenamun3.html
F+/f+; mummies; museum; encased; display; transform; bodyswap; trapped; mc; slave; entrap; switch; wrap; lesb; reluct/cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks   ;)
Title: Re: Return Of Ankhesenamun by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Marko Ramius 73 on June 02, 2016, 04:35:27 PM
I enjoyed the story very much  :) At first I didn´t realize it was a continuation. But when I discovered it, I read Kendalls Story as well. Will you continue this story? I would appreciate it!
Title: Re: Return Of Ankhesenamun by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Lobo De la Sombra on June 02, 2016, 05:22:06 PM
Thanks, Marko, I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far.  And yes, there is more in the works.  The priestess is free, but her handmaidens aren't, something she will be working to change.  Kendell, meanwhile, has the job of stopping her.  I'm looking at two more chapters to bring this story to a close.  I'll be sending part two in soon.  Thanks again for your kind words.
Title: Re: Return Of Ankhesenamun by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Marko Ramius 73 on June 03, 2016, 09:34:18 AM
Well, in this case, I´ll wait patiently  :D It will be interessting to see how Kendall will try to stop the priestess.
Title: Re: Return Of Ankhesenamun by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: jackierabbit1 on July 02, 2016, 09:34:33 AM
Very erotic in a short story scene kind of way. I like this format as it suits my limited time for both writing and reading these days, you as always packing a lot into a short story with very few words. It should be fun to see what a thousand year old nymphomaniac can do in the modern world with a fresh body and a thousand years of pent up sexual frustration to fuel her mischief. Could she find willing victims to take the place of her handmaidens, they spending some time on display in some museum for the sheer kink of it while another in their body did unspeakable things? Those unspeakable things after all could be quite normal in this day and age in certain places, but I'm sure you have pondered that already.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
Title: Re: Return Of Ankhesenamun by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Lobo De la Sombra on July 02, 2016, 04:55:05 PM
Thanks for your words, Jackie, I'm glad you enjoyed the story so far.  And yes, I have pondered the possibilities.  Chapter 2 went in yesterday, and 3 will be ready soon.
Title: Re: Return Of Ankhesenamun by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Marko Ramius 73 on July 26, 2016, 10:59:26 AM
I enjoyed Chapter 2 very much, especially the end. Instead of rescuing Gina, Kendall fllas prey to her intended target. I wonder, if she will be able to fullfill her rescue mission :)
Title: Re: Return Of Ankhesenamun by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Lobo De la Sombra on July 26, 2016, 04:19:47 PM
Thanks, Marko, I'm glad you enjoyed the little twist at the end of part 2.  Part 3 is well under construction, and should be ready soon.  I hope, when it's posted, you enjoy it's twists just as much.
Title: Re: Return Of Ankhesenamun by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Marko Ramius 73 on July 27, 2016, 01:44:55 PM
I hope, when it's posted, you enjoy it's twists just as much.

I´m sure of that  ;)