Author Topic: My Summer Of Dares by Jackie Rabbit  (Read 3615 times)

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Re: My Summer Of Dares by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #15 on: September 11, 2017, 09:11:00 AM »
Thank you Drulema for you kind words, and I must apologize for my tarty response. I think Jackie will train up well, and I also think she has found a way to upstage per pretty and well dressed friends. I do wonder if the girls will tolerate her being the center of attention for very long, and if they don't what they will do to put things more properly back in order from their perspective. They have either unknowingly, (or quite intentionally), been grooming their friend Jackie for a life of servitude, and for her to be stolen away by one of the men in this story after all their hard work would be ironic, especially in light of their general preference for female lovers. What did happen to Gregory's first pet? Now that's a question, was she stolen away by another pet owner with deeper pockets after a good showing, or did she run away on her own after the kink of their relationship had run it's course?

Thank you again for your thought provoking words, Jackie.

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Re: My Summer Of Dares by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #16 on: September 11, 2017, 09:54:05 AM »
Thank you Amy. I always struggle with how much to put into a story, too many details make for a boring read, too few leaving you to have to explain some detail after it becomes relevant, like the lack of a proper cage door locking mechanism. Such would almost seem a given in this world we play in, half a dozen well placed small pad locks permanently trapping Jackie inside the cage, or at least until the key holder decided to let her out. I don't believe Jackie ever pondered loosing the use of her fingers or hands in this manor, her own abilities diminished and trapping her in the cage rather than her friends enhanced by some mechanical means.
 She will be much more dependent on them this way, possibly to the point of irritation, and while Tracy and Dana's position on top will be secure, it comes at the cost of loosing a human servant that I think they will come to see between them as being more practical. Dana and Tracy are pampered and privileged, no one expects them to want to cook and clean up after themselves, and why should they when somebody else can do that for them pretty much free of charge, or at least for room and board?

I think Jackie will get off on being displayed in her identity concealing mask, but what she might not realize is that her pretty friends will be recognized, and when the three are seen out and about at some later date together everybody will suspect she was their masked pet at the show. I think that will be the motivation for her continued service to her friends well into the future if she should have any second thoughts, as would be a discrete tattoo that would link her pet persona and the human one should that become necessary.

Thank you again and please excuse my tarty response as I have had a lot going on here lately, Jackie.

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Re: My Summer Of Dares by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #17 on: November 06, 2017, 07:57:29 PM »
Finally I have been able to settle down and properly enjoy reading part 12

As before, I am going to write this as I read this next part of this wonderful story.  I have just gone back and re-read parts 10 and 11, to make sure that my memory is refreshed on the most recent events, even though I have a fairly clear memory of the story arc to this point.

Re-reading these two parts, I am really struck, again, by the sheer density of "little" details, each of which adds so much flavour and detail to the characters, the emotions, and the richness of what is happening here!  A lot of erotic stories have characters I care about, but few stories, few writers, have such nuanced and fascinating characters, where the inner state and thoughts of the characters are of such interest, and such a point of consideration for me as I am reading and enjoying :)

No stairs yet...  hang on, I don't recall stairs being an issue.  This is interesting, where are we going to?  What are we up to now?  The same building or a different location?  I assume the same building, but we are clearly setting out to go further and explore new parts.

Bound and free, controlled yet free to act out within the boundaries of your role...  yes, the duality is fun and fascinating, isn't it :)

*very evil smirk*  the planets not aligning, or perhaps, as before, your self pleasure acting to limit and control your willingness, acting as a break on the run away train of experience, a break that is now being disabled if not totally removed!  Things are lining up to get very interesting indeed going forward :)

Oh dear, is our little Jackie pet starting to feel frustrated at the realisation of her dreams, fantasies and desires?  Muwahhhhh!

OK, now I am a little confused, perhaps I should have gone back more parts.  We seem to be upstairs, or at least Jackie is, yet the sense is that she is also on the same floor as both the sitting room and the front door.  This seems an unusual house layout.  A minor point though, the arrival of food, and perhaps more importantly another man is much more interesting and intriguing at this point in time!

"bearing gifts of food for hungry humans", now that is a telling turn of phrase, a telling way of thinking about these things!  Jackie really does seem to be accepting and sinking into her pet persona here, and drawing the distinction between humans and pets!  Also delightfully limited in her ability to move and hide by her bondage, by her outfit :)

OK, I just did not go back far enough, we are deliberately upstairs and the front door is downstairs.  Excellent building arrangement though, the stairs acting as another barrier, another point of control for wayward pets *evil smirk*

Oh dear, does our pet not expect others to visit the house while she is staying over?  What ever gave her that idea?  *evil smirk*

Well duh!  Of course your friends, the girls, are in on your exposure like this, Gregory does not strike me as the sort of person to make such a silly mistake, but it is good to see you working this out, and also realising that yet again you are being pushed forward.  Which brings up an interesting side thought, while kept in pet persona, and without full use of her hands, Jackie won't be able to make any additions to her diary, so the "pushing forward" of events is going to have to come from others...

Well, clearly our pizza delivering friend is well informed on the pet lifestyle.  But a show?!  It seems the girls don't yet know about this, but they also seem open to the idea...  oh dear... *smirk*

Rules for how stock is transported?!  Oh my!  This is getting VERY interesting, very promising indeed!

Oh my!  LOL!  Conversation as spontaneous as the next sunrise indeed!  What a lovely way of putting it!

Again, talk of reciprocation, of payment in some form or other...  You keep teasing me like this, with this open ended question, what is on offer and who from?

Decision to make, well behaved or not, AH, and OH!  OH again!  OH!  OK, so the girls new all about this, and when the lie about not deciding to go to the show happened, I read that as them being surprised at the news of the show, but no, suddenly it seems the lie was about deciding, since going to the show was already the plan.  And behaving or not, a very clever and in fitting way of getting on going permission to keep pushing things forward!

My dear Jackie, vowing not to have second thoughts is all well and good, but it might not always be so easy if things keep on going forward, and exploring new heights of wicked kinkiness!

Um, does the word "maximum" from Dennis have some meaning here?  I don't think this is a reference to anything earlier in this story, so I will just have to wait and see it seems.

Oh my!  Suddenly Jackie is discovering and coming into her own power here, and using the power and appeal that has always been hers to grab a man's attention and to hold it most firmly on her!  But also the clear reminder and demonstration, via the name tag, that she is property, property of her friends, and theirs to do with as they will, and their current will is to keep Jackie most firmly in pet mode and status for now...

I want more!!!  Please be writing more parts to your wonderful stories, please :)

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Re: My Summer Of Dares by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #18 on: November 11, 2017, 12:53:04 PM »
Thank you so much for your wonderful insights, they force me to write better, or at least try to. Jackie is in for the long haul, that much is obvious, and I intend to let her let go and just enjoy the experience for what it is, comfortable in the knowledge that her friends love her and are ultimately responsible for her. They may at some point double cross her, or more accurately put their wants and "needs" above those of their friend, but such would be in character for them and their pampered upbringing as compared to Jackie's. There has always been an implied level of grooming with Jackie, they with their own long term opportunistic plans that I have yet to state clearly, unless of course some handsome man should come along and spoil them.

This story is a quality vs quantity thing for me, and I hope for your patience as I work on it.

Thank you again for your kind words, Jackie.

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Re: My Summer Of Dares by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #19 on: November 12, 2017, 02:30:51 PM »
Starting with quality vs quantity, the fact that I write my thoughts on each part, virtually line by line, should say it all :)  Yes, I would like more parts, more quickly, and even to talk you into returning to one or two of your older stories that have not seen any new parts in quite some time, but quality is what really matters here!

Some of your thoughts here really rather surprise me, and I wonder why that is, why my perspective on this is quite so different.  Thinking back, there have always been hints and comments about Jackie being a "helper" or even "maid" for her two friends, but in the story so far, in the scenes so far, this has always taken something of a back seat.  It is there, but mostly what I am seeing, picking up on and responding to is the work her friends are having to do, the time, energy and sometimes money that is being devoted to making Jackie's fantasies come to life, that it has felt much more like they exist to look after Jackie, than Jackie is there to look after them.

Plus, probably coloured by personal experience of how much work each side has to put in for scenes to come to life :)

But yes, there does come a point where their needs, desires and wants start to take priority over Jackie's, especially since there is a strong sense that they have been reading and responding, very promptly, to the new entries Jackie has been placing into her diary.

Which does leave me wondering what forms of payment are being hinted at and discussed with the two new men who have just appeared to help us with pet Jackie.  We know, clearly, that her friends are into women, but there are also clear hints that both of them admire a good looking man when one appears, and probably don't want to pay second fiddle to Jackie.  But how is this to play out?

A lot of it depends on the psychology of it, of how things are presented, worded and framed.  Offering sexual services can either be love making, something shared, something about both parties, or it can be quite one sided, one way or the other.  Somehow I don't see Jackie being offered up for sex at this point, it would go against the keep her horny and denied plan, and I feel it would make her friends jealous.  But what if Jackie is offered up to provide blow jobs, perhaps still while locked in a cage, keeping her clearly marked as an "animal", this would offer a form of usage, of payment, without automatically interfering with the friends desire to keep the men's attention on them as women, rather than on their naked friend.

The men appear worldly enough, experienced enough that they may well see and accept this distinction, but still, it might require Jackie to be punished for "using her body to try and steal the men away" from her friends, even though the friends were the ones to offer her up in the first place :)

The waiting for the next part gives me plenty of time to look forward to what you have in mind, and to keep up on life's other distractions, so don't rush, but also don't dawdle, I still have other stories of yours to pester you about as well :)