Author Topic: A story  (Read 797 times)

Offline Arkane

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A story
« on: December 28, 2017, 05:42:48 PM »
I found on gagged utopia site a story showing a strong influence from one of the best I've read here, the Dice Game by A Pensive Pen (Alex Machin).

Link is:
http://www.utopiastories.com/code/show_story.asp/recid/73784

I wouldn't call it plagiarism but the story there seems strongly influenced in my opinion (I wrote this in the comments below the story, too).
There are three girls playing a game of poker to decide which of them will be transformed into a bondage f***toy for their sorority's benefit (the loser will be sold to several males). They raise the stakes, every one adding further torments for the unfortunate loser, every one hoping to avoid defeat.
The ending is a bit unsatisfying but I liked it, so if you're curious check it out.

(and I seize the opportunity to wish you all a Happy New Year).




Offline Alex Makin

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Re: A story
« Reply #1 on: December 31, 2017, 02:57:45 PM »
I saw that! It's probably a coincidence, but there's a tiny chance it's an homage :)

Offline Tom

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Re: A story
« Reply #2 on: January 11, 2018, 12:48:11 AM »
Don't forget that generically, there are only six storylines - the rest is simply elaboration.