Author Topic: Robotic Discipline Machine by Ron McIngle  (Read 1770 times)

Offline Gromet

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Robotic Discipline Machine by Ron McIngle
« on: April 27, 2018, 03:55:32 AM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/machine/storieslr/roboticdisciplinemachine.html
Solo-F; machine/f; college; grades; strip; discipline; interogate; electrodes; profiles; spank; paddles; discovery; modify; files; mistake; cuffs; bond; breast; mast; denial; reward; vibrator; climax; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
« Last Edit: May 01, 2018, 12:53:45 AM by Gromet »

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Re: Robotic Discipline Machine by Ron McIngle
« Reply #1 on: April 30, 2018, 02:50:00 AM »
A delight! Kinda long but worth it. I sorta saw the ending coming, if Terri was into the spankings maybe her mom was. It's an awesome story, I especially like stories like here when punishments or torments go way off plan for a female character.

I honestly, about three paragraphs into the story, went back up to the top paragraph to see if it was in the "Handmaid's Tale" continuum. I know almost nothing about it, but it seemed like something that might fit there but also stands beautifully by itself as is. Just a comment.

I commend your imagination! Great story, enjoyed it a lot! Thank you!

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Re: Robotic Discipline Machine by Ron McIngle
« Reply #2 on: May 01, 2018, 03:58:33 AM »
Thank you for the kind review!

I tend to write longer stories with a bit of character development.  I know that many people want to get to the juicy stuff ASAP and won't read through a long development, so it pleases me when someone does!  I also try to maintain some degree of plausibility.

I am not sure what you meant by the "Handmaid's Tale". I have read the book by that title, and I wouldn't draw any comparisons.  Was there a story here on Gromet's by that name?

Ron

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Re: Robotic Discipline Machine by Ron McIngle
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2018, 03:45:23 PM »
Nice story.
It's interesting what will happen if parents WILL find out -:)

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Re: Robotic Discipline Machine by Ron McIngle
« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2018, 07:17:03 AM »
You mention character development and allow me to thank you for just that.
To me bondage is as much a mental state as it is a physical thing.
If you'd gone straight for the juicy bits the mental state would have been lost. (the anticipation, the altering of behavior to acquiesce the machine, the realization)
Thank you for providing those, I loved the story and I hope to see where this goes.