Author Topic: Robotic Discipline Machine by Ron McIngle  (Read 872 times)

Offline Gromet

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Robotic Discipline Machine by Ron McIngle
« on: April 27, 2018, 03:55:32 AM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/machine/storieslr/roboticdisciplinemachine.html
Solo-F; machine/f; college; grades; strip; discipline; interogate; electrodes; profiles; spank; paddles; discovery; modify; files; mistake; cuffs; bond; breast; mast; denial; reward; vibrator; climax; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
« Last Edit: May 01, 2018, 12:53:45 AM by Gromet »

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Re: Robotic Discipline Machine by Ron McIngle
« Reply #1 on: April 30, 2018, 02:50:00 AM »
A delight! Kinda long but worth it. I sorta saw the ending coming, if Terri was into the spankings maybe her mom was. It's an awesome story, I especially like stories like here when punishments or torments go way off plan for a female character.

I honestly, about three paragraphs into the story, went back up to the top paragraph to see if it was in the "Handmaid's Tale" continuum. I know almost nothing about it, but it seemed like something that might fit there but also stands beautifully by itself as is. Just a comment.

I commend your imagination! Great story, enjoyed it a lot! Thank you!

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Re: Robotic Discipline Machine by Ron McIngle
« Reply #2 on: May 01, 2018, 03:58:33 AM »
Thank you for the kind review!

I tend to write longer stories with a bit of character development.  I know that many people want to get to the juicy stuff ASAP and won't read through a long development, so it pleases me when someone does!  I also try to maintain some degree of plausibility.

I am not sure what you meant by the "Handmaid's Tale". I have read the book by that title, and I wouldn't draw any comparisons.  Was there a story here on Gromet's by that name?

Ron

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Re: Robotic Discipline Machine by Ron McIngle
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2018, 03:45:23 PM »
Nice story.
It's interesting what will happen if parents WILL find out -:)